Wednesday, November 7, 2007

A StoRy!


A good life was all what she wanted
But ironically she ended haunted
She wanted a life of fame
She ended living a life full of shame
She took some wrong turns in her life
And all she was left to do- was to strive
Misery and pain! she saw them all
And sadness kept taking her along

Thus one day she decided to end it all
Coz life had taken most of its toll
She collected all her guts
And she cried a lot first
Tears rushed out with speed
Wandering in the expanse of her beautiful sad face
They drip-dropped on her chest
She finally slit her wrist
Blood drew out bit by bit
Feeling nauseated she peeped through the door
She saw her mom working hard in the grocery store
She realized her mistake
Took a towel and wrapped it around her bleeding veins
Shedding all her tears away she applied make up to look better
She came out of her room, breaking all her painful fetters!!!

image credit: bebous

*(thot of sharing my poems here on this blog too)


10 ~CONFESSIONS~:

RADhika said...

Great Work!!

Joel said...

Nice poem! Should have been even more nicer if the actress in the poem was a little not opportunistic and turned her haunted life into the most adventurous one! :D

By the way, isn't tomorrow Diwali ? Happy Diwali if so! Don't burn yourself bursting crackers! :))

Joel said...

correction; more opportunistic(I typed 'not opportunistic') :\

humbl devil said...

nice little piece of poetry...
what was the inspiration for this one???may i ask???

NEHA CHANDOK!!!!! said...

@radhika...

appreciation counts...!

@Joel...

heroines always dnt get such chances right...happy diwali to u too...and yea...i won't burn myself coz m anti crackers...!!!so no chance!!!

@humble Devil...
thanx for leavin a thot...abt inspiration...let that remain a secret...!!!
:D

Amitoj said...

nice work really...
its very lyrical.. as gud as a song...
cheerss..

NEHA CHANDOK!!!!! said...

@AmitoZzzZZZZZzzzzzZZZZZ

thanx fr that zabardasti ka comment...hehheheh...

pulkit gupta said...

gud wrkk...
amny time we thought fr ourselves we bocome so selfish in life , evrytime we want for ourselves , that time we even dont think abt our parent who have given birth to us ..
who r caring for us till nw .. and they have some or the other dreams frm us....
and we have to complete there dreams by completeing our dreams ...
tht`s all
and nice rythimic poem

pulkit gupta said...

gud wrkk...
amny time we thought fr ourselves we bocome so selfish in life , evrytime we want for ourselves , that time we even dont think abt our parent who have given birth to us ..
who r caring for us till nw .. and they have some or the other dreams frm us....
and we have to complete there dreams by completeing our dreams ...
tht`s all
and nice rythimic poem

NEHA CHANDOK!!!!! said...

@pulkit...
very true...but then sometimes circumstances fail us big...however, i do salute those who before taking such an xtreme step, stop n once think abt those who matter...

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