Friday, January 11, 2008

Love Letter!


In the midst of a moonlit night, as you look so chic and bright..
I dream of a lovely life with you, such kind which see a chosen few.


As I see you holding me, and your gleam and your glee..

eyes go misty with the thought, the lovely life life has brought.

As we grow and love and care, soulful souls lying bare..

seldom would you find me right, yet always with you sleep and tight.

When I listen the echo ' I too', I know its all going be true..

lot of kids and sprawling lawn, their mom smiling sometimes yawn.


The more I think and fear sure, as I resolute care and more..

I wish to die in your arms, would I get this alms.

(P.S.-written by a frn)

14 ~CONFESSIONS~:

humbl devil said...

tell your friend to change the last line...

swati said...

@Humble devil....

whats wrong, by d way?

swati said...

all i mean ...is it seems perfect!!!

:) keep scribblin! NICE BLOG!

d SINNER!!! said...

@ HUMBLE DEVIL...

ok...bt same ques-whats wrong?

@Swati...

Thanx!!!

Vandita said...

hey good stuff :)...

d SINNER!!! said...

@vands.....

thnku thnku!

humbl devil said...

reasons have mailed ya...
but overall the pome is too good...
:)

Ashu said...

D sinner, great stuff!!!!!

d SINNER!!! said...

@ Humble devil...

hmmm....

@ ashu...

thanx! but belongs to somone else!

humbl devil said...

so are you gonna givr him those alms???
:P

d SINNER!!! said...

@ humble devil....

hheee ehhhh..!

Tapas Mohanty said...

WOW !!! Your friend is jst amazing !!! Tell him (or her) to keep penning .I liked it !

Tapas Mohanty said...

Hey ! U dint tell me how to start my "career" at the writersblend.Please please please .

d SINNER!!! said...

@ Tapas....

guess u talkin bt Shake inc...well, he is HE and yea...as he said, the invitation to join the gang has been sent to u....:)

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